Stevie Carroll (stevie_carroll) wrote,
Stevie Carroll

Are You Sure That's the Word You Were Looking For?

Reading a romance, I reach a scene in which the hero is watching the heroine in the shower, and he notes her concave belly. I'm now worrying about her health. Especially given all the cakes and fancy desserts we've seen her eat and the fact that her only exercise seems to be one short swim a day.

I'm also rather worried that in a contemporary story where the house has live-in staff, the heroine hasn't locked either the bedroom door or the door to her en suite before stripping off.

On a tangential note, did UK people watch the Freddie Flintoff documentary t'other night?
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